高考英语满分作文点评

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I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so Id like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress. Thats why I prefer total English. However, since we are all English beginners, its really hard to understand all that the teacher says. Sometimes we need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.

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本文写作十分成功。语言和句式是本文最大的特点。好词中词汇的使用，将作者的意思表达得完整而准确，从而映衬了词汇的重要性；其次，本文的句式以复杂句为主，表语、定语和状语从句的使用都十分到位。

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好词：1. immerse v.沉浸2. explanation n.解释3. make progress 取得进步

好句：1. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so Id like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress.

我对英语学习和外国文化有着浓厚的兴趣，因此我想沉浸在英语的学习氛围中，使得我能更快地进步。

好处：be immersed in 沉浸其中；so that 表示目的。

2. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.

因此，我的观点是，用英文教授，同时对于一些难以理解的内容用中文进行辅助讲解。

好处：表语从句使用正确。

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